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GAIA Commission from my new shop: Cheap Art is Cheap

For Ellebear and Death.

I like this piece, but I fail at Women's anatomy. Critique, please?

The person/s involved above is/are of legal age.
(c) Ellebear
Death

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:iconshamoosh:
First things first this is rather epic XD I know you diden't come up with the characters but still, you made them look awesome-er >D

Anatamoy wise everything seems in place, arms are correct (fff like I cant talk about arm legnths xD BUT WHATEVER >__>; ) shoulders are nicly curved and body porportians all look fine and dandy.

I think the simple colours look nice, though I think they'd look a little more ';powerfull' if they where brighter but idk if your scanner fucks shit up like mine does so...yeah.

Pretty much the only two things that look a little off are the outlines, because there kinda a lil bit wobbaly and i'm all OCD when it comes to stuff being straight |: and the coloring job, the way you can see what way the pens gone and stuff. But still, overall looking at the picture it looks awesome (as i've said befor) and dude I frigging love your style XD and the blond haired chick makes me giggle.
Oh and you do /not/ suck at female anatomys |: stfu


we make babies now yes?
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:iconsecret-ghost:
I like~

Especially how you censored Ellebear's bewbs.

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Kyle :: Do you really think my hat is stupid?"
Stan :: As a matter of fact, I think it is the nicest hat I have ever known."

Kyle: So Jesus died and then three days later he had an erection.
:iconshamoosh:
I CAME I SAW I CRTIC'ed

|D

<3

love the chick with blond hair, she's all happy and topless~~~

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:icontechnoravercall:
'3'

I LOVE YOU AND YOUR CRITIQUE. <3

|D

I know what you mean on the wobbly lines, I shoulda tried to do better but I was in Math class and my teacher kept saying ';PUT IT UP NOAW' and - Oh look, excuses. xD

As for the colouring.

I just fail at Markers.

And GAWD, Ellbear was so EASY compared to Death. Dx

. . . Fffftt.

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:iconmochimaster:
all i would have to say is just darken the black shading, other wise this is FANTASTIC!!!

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:iconmochimaster:
all i would have to say is just darken the black shading, other wise this is FANTASTIC!!!

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:icontechnoravercall:
xD I should have, but I wasn't thinking.

Thanks 8D

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ن٥ﻻ ﻉ√٥ﺎ ٱ
YOU KIRK-LOVING SPOCK-SUCKER.

Spock -holds arms out for Kirk-
Kirk -points to self- Hmm?
Spock -inclines head- Mm-mmm.
Kirk -shrugs-climbs into Spock's arms-
:icontechnoravercall:
It's cause I drewed them funny. |DD

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ن٥ﻻ ﻉ√٥ﺎ ٱ
YOU KIRK-LOVING SPOCK-SUCKER.

Spock -holds arms out for Kirk-
Kirk -points to self- Hmm?
Spock -inclines head- Mm-mmm.
Kirk -shrugs-climbs into Spock's arms-
:iconsecret-ghost:
Nice xD

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"Did some one say 'catch a Jew'?" - Cartman

Kyle :: Do you really think my hat is stupid?"
Stan :: As a matter of fact, I think it is the nicest hat I have ever known."

Kyle: So Jesus died and then three days later he had an erection.

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